Facing In

The fish in the closet
are wandering

Diamonds have become used to
force feeding

No wonder the stadiums
are turning inside out

I wish to learn how to swallow
this morning blindness

4 responses to “Facing In

  1. Donald Brandis

    Another good poem. I think writing a lot is how we get better at it. Also, facing in needs facing out and vice versa. The fish in my closet are restless too.

    • Craig Brandis (aka Burl Whitman)

      Thanks bro. Maybe the fish swim between all of our closets looking for hooks to bite

  2. How do you tell if a poem is good? With poems, you just know (with other things, one can get into explanation). And this is a good one 🙂

    • Craig Brandis (aka Burl Whitman)

      Glad you liked it. I agree on knowing without thinking about it. Love love or chocolate.

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