The fish in the closet
are wandering
Diamonds have become used to
force feeding
No wonder the stadiums
are turning inside out
I wish to learn how to swallow
this morning blindness
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- A Distant Echo Before Nightfall
- A Note to My Children About Money and Time
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- Chemotherapy
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- Neruda on the Poet’s Pact
- Pirate Sloth
- Poem for the Anniversary of 9/11
- Practicing
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- The Corona Diaries – a Short Short Story
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- Thermopolis, Wyoming
- This is a Dance, Flo
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- To Raymond Carver
- To The Old Aztec Poets
- Trinidad
- Two Perverts of Piso
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- What Became the Bandersnatch?
- When Words Lose Their Meaning
- Write Like Hell Won’t Have You
- Writing Letters
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Another good poem. I think writing a lot is how we get better at it. Also, facing in needs facing out and vice versa. The fish in my closet are restless too.
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Thanks bro. Maybe the fish swim between all of our closets looking for hooks to bite
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How do you tell if a poem is good? With poems, you just know (with other things, one can get into explanation). And this is a good one 🙂
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Glad you liked it. I agree on knowing without thinking about it. Love love or chocolate.
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